once upon a time there lived a girl her name was lucy she was a lovely little girl till this one day. there was a big storm and she ran outsisde to find cover but she didnt make it in time then BOOM a struck of lightning hit her right in the heart. then she fainted and the next day her mother fond her lying on the ground she thouth she was dead. so she rushed her to the hospital the ran straight into sugan then the doctor told her mother there was good news and bad news she told her the good news he said she has only fainted and she asked what the bad news was and he said she had been struck by lightning.
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Hi Honey! Remember sentences and names start with a capital letter! and they end with full stops (Or another punctuation) . But it was a very interesting story! Also i wish you could make the writing bigger or make the color darker.
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thanks analise and harlyn
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